How do I correct writing assignment?

~ Point out aspects of the problematic writing with different colors (and a key at the top).

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~ Show students how to expand their ideas by adding visual description.

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~ Show them a sample writing to teach paragraphing.

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~ Use a sample paragraph to show how ideas are supported by elaboration.

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~ Contrast students’ writing with my rewritten version, and identify ways to upgrade their wordings

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